I'm about a third of the way through my "Rocky Horror Picture Show" Ranma Fanfic and 
now I'm looking for about six people to read and review it before I post it.

Here is what I want: 1. Constructive criticism, 2. Suggestions as to how I can improve 
characterization, dialogue, etc. 3. Feedback as to what does an does not work (and so on) 

What I do not want: 1. abuse 2. abuse 3. abuse (abuse means useless noise i.e. "you stink" "give up" "this sucks", etc.) I am not offering myself out as a text punching bag.

If you're interested send me a note saying so (include a little about you're self, I like to know who I'm dealing with.)

I 've got one person so far but I still need a few more.