ok, first off, i don;t have and havent read the first 3 of this fanfic (i'm
a newbie here) so this will be soley on the 4th one. I think you need to
expand a bit more, giving a little more detail on the actions
especially..it's kinda hard to get a mental picture of some of them. I'm
always a sucker for ranma and akane actually showing affection (even if it
is supposed to be an act) so i do like that part, even tho it takes some
getting used. I'd like a copy of the first 3 if it's not too much trouble, i
think that would really help me get a better perspective on what's going on
(not that i ever claim to know what;s going on). ^_^ 
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