At 17:11 -0500 19/12/96, H. Torrance Griffin wrote:

	That's all I've come up with.
	My biggest problem is getting Ranma out of his engagements without
anyone getting disowned (yes, he and Shampoo _are_ getting together).  If
anyone knows more than I, could they speak up?

   Well, if Shampoo was to be adopted as a Tendo daughter, the the deal of
Ranma marrying a Tendo daughter would be fulfilled, no?

   BTW, great story!  I hope to see the rest soon.

	Nabiki: Developing a serious crush on transfer student Kuonji
Ukyo, to the point of manipulating 'him' into dates (Author's Note: Is she
being fooled, does she care?).

   This relationship bugs me a little.  Nabiki might be fooled at first
sign, but she isn't as terminally stupid as Kuno.  My guess is that she
would find out on her own soon enough.


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