Usually, Akane waking up is not that important 
 to the story.

Ah yes, but it is such a beautiful description.
For me one of the things that makes a good
story is a good description of moods and 
what is going on.  Of course I also like script
style stories, but they allow a lot to the imagination
which is also good.  Damn I am not making any 
sence so I'll just shut up now.

Bye
Olin