I've managed to revise the first two chapters pretty well.  They are now
available at http://panther.greenville.edu/~ashadwic/ranma/dreams.htm.
If anyone would like to take a looksie at those for C&C purposes, feel
free.  Thanks!

Numbski
Tony Shadwick
Greenville College  Box 495
Greenville, IL  62246

numbski@prairienet.org
numbski@greenville.edu
ashadwic@greenville.edu

Numbski's Outta Site is now:  http://www.greenville.edu/~ashadwic
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Ryouga continues his search at Jusenkeyo for a cure...
*SPLASH* "bzzz" 
   "spring of drowned mosquito..." 
   *SPLASH* "glub..glub..glub.." 
   "...drowned fish..." 
   {How did a fish get drowned in the water?} Ryouga thought. 
   *SPLASH* "Ark ark ark!" 
   "...drowned seal..." 
   *SPLASH* "HONK?" 
   "Oh!"  Said the guide with great emotion, his face a mask of sorrow. 
"That is Nissanniichuan!  Spring of drowned Nissan Pathfinder. Very tragic
story of Pathfinder I just buy two weeks ago and crash into pond.  Very
tragic story!"