Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] The Mihoshi Incident, Chapter 12 (final beta)
From: Malka Korman
Date: 12/12/1996, 10:02 AM
To: doppleganger@pipeline.com
CC: FFML <fanfic@fanfic.com>

Derek Sherman wrote:

Tenchi Trek : The Mihoshi Incident
A Tenchi Muyo/Star Trek crossover

This was a really dirty trick to play!  You sent all 12 at once, 
so naturally when I started reading them at work, I couldn't stop.
Unfortunately, it was also very hard to keep from laughing...

This was one of the funniest fanfics I've read in a long time.

One minor criticism--you use "you're" in place of "your" a whole
bunch of times.

Also, I may be inviting flames on this, but I think "cute Washuu"
is probably better than "little Washuu."  (I don't remember what
translation Pioneer used in the dubs)

Thanks for enlivening an otherwise dull day :-).

Gavin Steyn