Malka Korman wrote:
 

Derek Sherman wrote:

Tenchi Trek : The Mihoshi Incident
A Tenchi Muyo/Star Trek crossover

This was a really dirty trick to play!  You sent all 12 at once,
so naturally when I started reading them at work, I couldn't stop.
Unfortunately, it was also very hard to keep from laughing...

Hope you didn't lose your job over it  ^_^
 

This was one of the funniest fanfics I've read in a long time.

Thank you...

One minor criticism--you use "you're" in place of "your" a whole
bunch of times.

I do? D'OH! That's what I get for proof-reading my own stuff.
I'll look into it.
 

Also, I may be inviting flames on this, but I think "cute Washuu"
is probably better than "little Washuu."  (I don't remember what
translation Pioneer used in the dubs)

Well, the dubs refer to her as "Little Washuu" (and yes, the dubs
are all I have to work with right now... until I can scrape up
enough money to get the LDs). Just out of curiousity, does the 
original Japanese dialog have it as "Little Washuu" or
"Cute Washuu" or what?



Derek