Subject: [C&C] Suds-kun's Reviews - November #4
From: Suds-kun
Date: 12/11/1996, 12:58 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Hello all!

Reviews of November postings, starting with 11/12.
Over 250 unreviewed fics

Ch- Ch- Ch- Ch- Ch-Changes.
Turn and face the strange, Ch- Ch- Ch- changes.

I am now adding the archive number of each posting. How do you
retrieve from the archive? An explanation follows the Tea Kettle
description.

Second, the posting date will now be the date that fic was mailed
from the FFML. I had been listing the date the author sent the post,
but recently there has been up to a two day lag between the send of
the fic and its receipt.

The 'Tea Kettle' system:
Two = Read the fic. "Hmmm, interesting."
Three = Good Fic. "Hmmm, very interesting."
Four = Great Fic!! "Ooooo." O.O
Five = Awesome Fic!!!! "Whoa!" @.@
dead Ryouga = You went and got me all depressed. If I stop reviewing
after I list your fic, you REALLY got me depressed.

To retrieve a post from the archive, send an e-mail as follows:
MailTo: fanfic-request@fanfic.com
Subject: archive get
Message: gimme latest/#####

The ##### is the archive number that I list. A better description of
this is in the FAQ, archive #19877. I used gimme, 'cuz it sounded
good ta me. ^_-

And awaaay we go!

Ranma: Betrayal - Part One
By J. P. Goleski
Posted by "J. Austin Wilde" <jaustin@aloha.net>
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 19:44:35 -0500
Archival number: 23295
Quick Quote: She has been associating with known criminals.  Yakuza,
Mr. Tendo.
Comments: The white sedan is coming for you. Bwahahahahahahahahaha!
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: Ranma's Revenge: Look what I found in the attic
By Neil Reynolds
Posted by Neil Reynolds <neil@panix.com>
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 22:33:36 -0500
Archival number: 23324
Quick Quote: Well you got caught with a flat? Well, how 'bout that?
Comments: If you enjoy doing the "time warp," you've GOT to read
this!
Two Tea Kettles (or two bic lighters, one for each hand)

Ranma: A Wolf in the Dojo
By Thom Youngblood
Posted by White Wolf <ranma@tendo-dojo.ranma.net>
Posting date: Wed, 13 Nov 1996 06:08:54 -0500
Archival number: 23368
Quick Quote: While everyone else sat staring at the meal, I dug right
in.
Comments: Has your hair grown back, yet? Heh. This was fun.
Two Tea Kettles (way too short)

APCCGNN: Weapons of War
By Richard Lawson
Posted by Richard Lawson <sterman@sprynet.com>
Posting date: Wed, 13 Nov 1996 10:09:52 -0500
Archival number: 23376
Quick Quote: And then, from the yard - to Akiko's horror if not her
surprise - the screams began.
Comments: At one point, I thought Atsuko was arguing with a borg.
Then you went and bashed me 'tween the eyes. @,@
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: Twilight Existence
By Scott K. Jamison
Posted by Scott Jamison <majks@cyberx.com>
Posting date: Wed, 13 Nov 1996 23:44:10 -0500 part 3/?
Archival number: 23455
Posting date: Wed, 20 Nov 1996 13:47:22 -0500 part 3/? V1.1
Archival number: 24005
The above post was smashed together with post #24010.
Bits and bytes everywhere. It didn't look pretty.
Posting date: Thu, 28 Nov 1996 00:29:09 -0500 Part Four
Archival number: 24565
Posting date: Mon, 2 Dec 1996 13:14:17 -0500 Part Four v1.1
Archival number: 24855
Posting date: Thu, 7 Feb 2036 01:51:50 -0500 part 5/?
BGC Forever, eh WW?
Arrival date: Fri, 6 Dec 1996 15:41:43 -0500 (EST) part 5/?
Archival number: 25140
Quick Quote: Now there's a boy at school, Upperclassman Kunou, who's
in Nabiki's grade.  He's asked to date me-
Quick Quote #2: A couple of days later, I was cuddling Anne (the doll
Kunou gave me) as I read Ranma's latest entry.
Quick Quote #3: "Akane, doesn't Ryouga have fangs?"
Comments: Heh. So that's what could happen if Ranma tried to get
cured?
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: THE PRISONER 1/2 "001:  ARRIVAL"
By John Biles
Posted by "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Posting date: Wed, 13 Nov 1996 23:53:13 -0500
Archival number: 23458
Quick Quote: A giant robot white cat is swimming after her.
Comments: And all that Jim left was the onion?
Three Tea Kettles

Suds-kun gets out his colored glasses and looks at them. He sighs and
sets them down.
Ranma: Building Bridges
By WebDragon
Posted by WebDragon <kmark@odyssey.on.ca>
Posting date: Thu, 14 Nov 1996 00:04:17 -0500 part 1/3
Archival number: 23462
Posting date: Thu, 14 Nov 1996 00:06:18 -0500 part 2/3
Archival number: 23463
Posting date: Thu, 14 Nov 1996 00:11:30 -0500 part 3/3
Archival number: 23464
Quick Quote: "The Ranma I knew would not have struck anyone in
anger."
Quick Quote #2: "No!!  I can't do it, Akane!  I just can't!"
Quick Quote #3: Kentaro's statement hung in the air for a shocked
moment.
Comments: Umm, interesting rant at the end. It seems that Mr.
Lawson's two little fics greatly affected not only you but a good
number of FFMLers and their views on writing future fics. Now,
continuity question. At the end of TNOL Mr. Lawson states that Ryoga,
Mousse and Shampoo were cured six years prior to graduation. So,
Ryoga shouldn't have been P-chan when Akane visited Ranma at college
and hugged P-chan afterward. Other than that, this was quite a
riveting story and fit very well between TOP & TNOL.
Five Tea Kettles

Ranma: Saishu no Wakare (Final Farewell)
By WebDragon
Posted by WebDragon <kmark@odyssey.on.ca>
Posting date: Sun, 8 Dec 1996 01:15:39 -0500
Archival number: 25272
Posting date: Sun, 8 Dec 1996 03:37:09 -0500 repost
Archival number: 25282
Posting date: Tue, 10 Dec 1996 00:34:04 -0500 [Revised!]
Archival number: 25394
Quick Quote: His image of Ukyo, full of life and happiness, now
changed to one where she was hunched over her desk in absolute grief,
her limp hair hiding her face from view.
Comments: I'm going to go watch some OMG now. *sniff*
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sniff*
Five Tea Kettles
and a Dead Ryouga

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