At 01:22 AM 12/8/96 -0600, sterman@sprynet.com wrote:
A while ago, an idea was bantered around to write stories based on each
of the Ten Commandments. The idea intrigued me on a purely technical
basis. I volunteered to write a story based on what I thought would be
the hardest Commandment to write about. This is the result.
For once, I have to say I rather like this story. I'd like your
opinion. It's also the shortest story I've ever written.
I wouldn't touch a thing. :)
What do you think of the title? I thought to use "Heart of the Stone",
until one of my pre-readers pointed out it was a bit derivative. I
could use "Stone's Heart", but I don't like the way that sounds.
Lend me the stone strength of the past and I will
lend you
The wings of the future, for I have them.
- Robinson Jeffers
"To the Rock That Will be a Cornerstone" [1924]
Does this quote give you any ideas?
Jeanne Hedge
http://www.accsyst.com/jhedge/
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