Subject: [need input] About _Ranko 1/2_
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 12/6/1996, 1:15 PM
To: Fanfiction ML

Mina-san, ohayou!

I have a question to all of you who read my series _Ranko 1/2_. 
After the past few parts of the series I got a few responsesalong
the lines of "There's so much mushy stuff with all the hugging and
squeezing of hands and stuff - Do you have to make this so
*touchy-feely*?"  Even Uncle Fester wondered if I wasn't going a
little fast with Ranko and Akane's relationship - and *where*. :)

Well, I realized that this was my cultural bias shining through. 
Where I live, a hug and a kiss on the cheek is a perfectly normal
greeting among young girls.  You see it happen everywhere, so I
let Ranko and Akane display the same kind of casual affection. 
The trouble is, they don't come from where I live - They're from
Japan, and I often read that the physical signs of affection and
friendship are very laid back in Japan.

So I want to know:  Am I going totally over the top with these
two, speaking in japanese terms?  I suspect that's the case, so my
next question is:  What can I do to keep at least a *semblance* of
authenticity, while still conveying the same to the western
audience?

I would appreciate every suggestion (which doesn't mean I won't
ignore most and pick just the ones I like.  :)


Sebastian
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