On Mon, 2 Dec 1996, Harold Ancell wrote:

I really like this story---it's quite good, to great when you got to
having the two exchange letters, etc.  I also really liked touches
like yin/yang sign on the bedroom door.

	Thanks!

The premise also lets you retell the beginning story without excessive
repetition.

	Well, some repetition is inevitable, but things are about to 
change drastically...

I do wonder how you're going to handle the other animal victims of the
springs, especially Ryouga; without the intellegence to find hot water
(rather rare in nature) it's hard to imagine he'd make it back to
Nerima unaided (then again, maybe Ryouga is the only one who could :-).
Maybe you need to give him an uncursed companion....

	Who says Ryouga has a curse?  :-)

SKJAM!