Not too shabby. Strangely enough I initially missed the meaning of
'Orange' in the title. (Hey, we could set up an entire fic rating scale
based on citrus fruits!)

Still I would like to see a story concerning whatever lead up to this. I
mean, this isn't typical Akane-Ranma behaviour. SOMETHING must have
happened to break down their inhibitions to this (let's face it,
whenever Ranma is even faced with the SUGGESTION of kissing Akane, he
turns into a jibbering idiot!)

Oh, and maybe you should have more comedy bits like with the watergun
(snigger).

The Prime Saggitarian,
Alpha Centauri

"NuqDaq yuch Dapol"

-Useful Klingon Phrase

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