Excellent, for the most part.  Keeps well with continuity in your
stories.

Why is Kasumi so concerned?  Does she honestly think Ranma would try
anything?  I think the reasons everyone thinks Ranma and Akane will
have sex should be made clearer.

	Why does she think they would try it? because they're
	teenagers. Jeez. Why is she especialy worried about _that_ night?
 	well, I'm planning a bit of a revenge fic where I discuss
	this story with Nabiki. She pays more attention to the timeline
	and the laundry pole than the folks on the ML. (BIG HINT)

Akane saying 'dear' sounds awkward.

	The Japanese word is "anata", which actualy scans better, but
	not enough people would get the depth of it.

Is their another expression you 
could use?  I just can't see 'dear' coming from Akane.

	So what else would shut Ranma up? It has to be something she
	had never called him before.
	

Nice imagery, as always.

	Domo.