On Sun, 1 Dec 1996, Adam Barnes wrote:

Not too shabby. Strangely enough I initially missed the meaning of
'Orange' in the title. (Hey, we could set up an entire fic rating scale
based on citrus fruits!)

	Interesting thought... the sharper tasting the fruit, the lewder
the story, perhaps?

Still I would like to see a story concerning whatever lead up to this. I
mean, this isn't typical Akane-Ranma behaviour. SOMETHING must have
happened to break down their inhibitions to this (let's face it,
whenever Ranma is even faced with the SUGGESTION of kissing Akane, he
turns into a jibbering idiot!)

	True.. the prospect of romance, or even simple sex {they are NOT
the same thing} seems to turn off Ranma's cereberal cortex like a cheap
light bulb.

Oh, and maybe you should have more comedy bits like with the watergun
(snigger).

	ROFLOL!!!

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