Subject: Re: [FFML] [FanFic] [R 1/2] "Orange"
From: databank@nash.mindspring.com (Zen)
Date: 12/2/1996, 8:12 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 00:46 12/2/96, Richard Lawson wrote:

Well, you know, I think this is one of your lesser works.  That's like
telling Picasso, "I don't like this painting as much as your other
ones."  Still a good story, and it's nice to see your Ranma and Akane
moving more and more towards acceptance and culmination.

Yet, for me at least, it didn't quite have the emotional impact of your
other stories.  Probably because there was no angst or anything, no
point of conflict at all in this story.  I knew going in that "it"
wasn't going to happen, so there was no tension in that regard.

Ahh so.  The Old "You Can't Make Up If You Don't Fight" rule....


Zen the Heretic-