Subject: Re: [FFML] [FanFic] [R 1/2] "Orange" -Reply 2nd ed.
From: JAMES PALMER
Date: 12/2/1996, 6:17 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com, databank@nash.mindspring.com



Zen <databank@nash.mindspring.com> 12/02/96 01:31pm >>>
At 12:45 12/2/96, bridget ellen engman wrote:

      "Okay, you can stay my iinazuke." She said softly, pulling him
downward. Ranma resisted playfully, then giving in he lay beside
her. He  brushed the hair from her eyes and leaned over her, his lips
inches from hers. She reached up and wrapped a hand around the
back of his head, and grabbed his ponytail with the other. She tried
to pull him downward, but he resisted again with a coy smile. She
pulled herself upwards to his lips. 

                       ^^^  not sure if I can picture Ranma being...
coy.  teasing, yes.  Coy?

Well, as often as Ranma ends up in that pond, Zen sees him more as
being koi.

BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!   Loved that Zen....


There are a few typos I didn't point out, since they're obviously typos,
but not many.  Looking forward to yellow... :)

So is Zen.

Ditto.

SuperHentai