Joseph,

I liked the story.  It wasn't a lemmon, but suggestive and caring. 
"Orange" is an appropriate description.  If Akane and Ranma could
actually get alone together, (and Ranma preventing himself from getting
Malleted (tm) ^_-). I could see something similar to this happening.  They
both love each other.  They just keep getting interupted or they fight over
insults neither really means.  Keep writing.

SuperHentai