Venkarel wrote:

       And even if I did read it, I might not comment on it unless I had
something interesting to contribute...so the problem might not be that
people aren't reading it...

Those of us who aren't in school are going through the Thanksgiving Holidays.
"Mundane" friends and our Families expect us to tear ourselves away from
our computer monitors and put in an appearance around the massive meals
they have through great labor prepared for us.  It seems reasonable to me that
any long fic released just now might get a delayed reaction.

As for myself, I've followed Ami to Isolde/Naru's side, so I'm still ignorant of the
Norse motif's.

If I have to react RIGHT NOW, then I'd have to say this story is interesting and
fun, but I miss the stronger romance elements. I was a sucker for "First Knight"
and wish we could catch people in their clinches from their own point of view.
By running around inside Ami's head, we can only catch echoes and stolen 
embraces of the passions raging around us.  

Jim Nutley