Hello all!
Reviews of November postings, starting with 11/3.
My rating system is based on 'Tea Kettles'
Two = Read the fic. "Hmmm, interesting."
Three = Good Fic. "Hmmm, very interesting."
Four = Great Fic!! "Ooooo." O.O
Five = Awesome Fic!!!! "Whoa!" @.@
dead Ryouga = You went and got me all depressed. If I stop reviewing
after I list your fic, you REALLY got me depressed.
And awaaay we go!
Ranma: Converging Series [ACT 2]
By Kevin Eav, Kunoichi, Ross McKenzie, RpM and Christopher Willmore
Posted by RPM - acct 3/5 <rpm39788@Bayou.UH.EDU>
Posting date: Sun, 3 Nov 1996 19:05:12 -0600 (CST)
Quick Quote: "Have you seen a small silver locket anywhere?"
Comments: I was familiar with the characters from the different fics,
but started to get confused toward the end (even with the help of the
Guide). Some of the character developments did surprise me, 'tho.
(Childra, for example)
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Ranma: Untitled, Chapter 1 [Grammar fixed, i hope]
or
The Long Never Ending Epic Which Will Probably Never Have A Name
By Michael Chen aka Zenki
Posted by "Michael Chen" <michael.h.chen@yale.edu>
Posting date: Mon, 4 Nov 1996 10:50:25 -0500
Quick Quote: By the way, Ranma, I kind of love you...
Comments: I liked this rewrite and the concept. It'd be easier to
read if it was in, say, 70-80 character wide lines.
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SM: A SM Poem (A poem Rei Hino might write)
Ghostwritten by John Biles
Posted by "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Posting date: Mon, 4 Nov 1996 23:11:34 -0600 (CST)
Arrival date: Tue, 5 Nov 1996 00:40:58 -0500
Quick Quote: I see in you what I wish I had...
Comments: I just love poems :)
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SM: Look out world! Two more Sailor Moon Poems, both by Haruka :)
or
SM: Haruka's Dark Night of the Soul
SM: Haruka speaks to Michiru
Ghostwritten by John Biles
Posted by "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Posting date: Mon, 4 Nov 1996 23:55:54 -0600 (CST)
Arrival date: Tue, 5 Nov 1996 00:56:43 -0500
Quick Quote: She has a soul that remains unstained.
Quick Quote #2: But you can't escape yourself.
Comments: Hmm. Not gut wrenching enough.
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SM: Like Wow! Three sets of poems in three days!
or
SM: Usagi and Naru
Ghostwritten by John Biles
Posted by "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Posting date: Tue, 5 Nov 1996 13:39:34 -0600 (CST)
Quick Quote: On that day, a part of me died.
Quick Quote: On that day, Sailor Moon was born.
Comments: This is the best intro to Sailor Moon I have ever seen. Now
this was gut wrenching.
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Ranma: Keiko The Gaijin
By Usagi No Onna
Posted by nhunt@jagat.com (Newton Hunt)
Posting date: Tue, 5 Nov 1996 16:48:00 -0500
Quick Quote: "KEIKO IS AKANE'S FRIEND IN BATH WITH RANMA?!?!"
Comments: I liked it, but Keiko holding her own with Shampoo?
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Ranma: Ito Takahashi's Memoirs - Part 2
or
Ranma and Me (The Life and Times of Ranma's cousin, Ito Takahashi)
as told to Uncle Fester
Posted by Uncle Fester <sandborn@microlink.net>
Posting date: Tue, 5 Nov 1996 22:05:56 -0600 (CST)
Reposting date: Thu, 7 Nov 1996 19:22:50 -0600 (CST)
Quick Quote: What? Oh, sorry. Just reminiscing.
Comments: Definitely a different POV. ;) I can still see Nabiki
running down the hallway. @.@
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Ranma: Sins of the Father parts 1-4
By LPrior
Posted by Lisa Prior <lprior@geocities.com>
Posting date: Wed, 06 Nov 96 13:53:45 PST Part 1(teaser)(first draft)
Posting date: Sat, 09 Nov 96 19:51:10 PST Part 1(second draft)& Part2
Posting date: Sat, 16 Nov 96 12:13:05 PST Part 3
Posting date: Sun, 24 Nov 96 15:27:50 PST (slight rewrite Parts 1-3)
Posting date: Sun, 24 Nov 96 15:31:36 PST Part 4
Quick Quote: "Yep." Make that two slow ones. Suteko turned to
Ryouga. "Your next, cutie. Got a question?"
Comments: Suteko seemed almost otaku like in part 4. Looking forward
to part 5. Good build up, so far.
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Ranma: The Return, part 1
By Tom Schauer
Posted by Thomas_Schauer@ITA.DOC.GOV
Posting date: Wed, 06 Nov 1996 16:58:56 -0500
Quick Quote: "What, you think this is funny?"
Comments: Nope, not funny. It needs a part 2, 'tho. This is more or
less a teaser to mess with our minds, ne? Greek myths don't end
happily. *sigh*
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Ranma: Ranma's Sudden Switch: Revenge of the Oni!
>From the Desk of Megane 6.7
Posted by fcasper@yesic.com (Casper, Frank)
Posting date: Wed, 06 Nov 1996 17:49:02 -0500 Part 1 Revised
Posting date: Wed, 06 Nov 1996 17:49:16 -0500 Part 2
Quick Quote: Damn these stupid horns! They make me stick out like a
sore thumb!
Comments: Oooo, I liked the ending. So, what's going to happen to the
guests?
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Ranma: Sine Titulo!, Chapter 2 (grammatical fix #1) (Untitled)
Ranma: Untitled Chapter 6 (draft)
By Michael Chen aka Zenki
Posted by "Michael Chen" <michael.h.chen@yale.edu>
Posting date: Wed, 6 Nov 1996 19:33:57 -0500 Chapter 2
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 01:49:20 -0500 Chapter 6
Quick Quote: Before I begin, promise that you will get back with
Akane!
Comments: After the end of chapter 6, I don't think he's going to
keep that promise. ;)
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Ranma: A few little words, A few little problems (1/?)
By Ben Kosse
Posted by Ben Kosse <bmk7411@cs.rit.edu>
Posting date: Wed, 06 Nov 1996 22:13:16 -0500
Quick Quote: "Shampoo, I'm going to tell you something I haven't told
anyone else, not even Akane or Ukyou."
Comments: Whoa! One thing, Ryouga seemed a little too understanding,
as did Akane. But the two of them holding hands was funny. Will there
be a second part?
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Ranma: The Time of Changes part 2
By Brendan O'Donnell
Posted by "Brendan O'Donnell" <brenda02@sprynet.com>
Posting date: Wed, 6 Nov 1996 20:02:19 -0800
Posting date: Fri, 8 Nov 1996 19:54:21 -0800 (slightly revised)
Quick Quote: "If I break the trust and tell you Ryouga's secrets I'm
no better than my father."
Comments: "Make nice," huh? Yeah, right. ;)
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Ranma: Alternative Reality
By Michael Chen aka Zenki
Posted by "Michael Chen" <michael.h.chen@yale.edu>
Posting date: Thu, 7 Nov 1996 13:16:51 -0500 Chapter 1
Posting date: Thu, 21 Nov 1996 11:29:31 -0500 Chapter 2
Quick Quote: Akane paused `So his name is Ranma...'
Comments: Does chap 1 relate to chap 2? Will each chapter be a
different variation on this theme?
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Ranma: Worse, Chapter Six
By Scott K. Jamison
Posted by Scott Jamison <majks@cyberx.com>
Posting date: Thu, 7 Nov 1996 21:21:55 -0600 (CST)
Posting date: Fri, 15 Nov 1996 18:09:22 -0600 (CST) V1.1
Quick Quote: "You don't remember loving Ryouga, do you?"
Comments: I like this series, keep going! "TOP" got you too?
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Ranma: Ranma . . . in Love!?
By Christopher Bair
Posted by Christopher Bair <caern3@cris.com>
Posting date: Fri, 08 Nov 1996 23:42:26 -0500 Part One
Posting date: Sat, 16 Nov 1996 00:01:51 -0500 Part Two
Posting date: Fri, 22 Nov 1996 21:19:42 -0500 Part Three
Quick Quote: "Because, you were probably in love."
Comments: Promises, promises. ^_- You're going to do more with Izumi
than just training, right?
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Twister/BGC: Sidestory for Twisted Path - Tangled Skeins
By Ed Becerra and Twister
Posted by Edward Becerra <eabecerr@henge1.henge.com>
Posting date: Sat, 9 Nov 1996 13:07:32 -0700 (MST) Part One
Posting date: Sun, 10 Nov 1996 19:07:06 -0700 (MST) Part Two
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 14:42:35 -0700 (MST) Part Three
Posting date: Fri, 15 Nov 1996 15:47:21 -0700 (MST) Part Four
Quick Quote: "HOW?! Tell me, just _how_ could things be worse!"
Quick Quote #2: At least what happened to Twister was a true
accident, Sylvie.
Comments: *sigh* I liked Minerva's singing
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Ranma: Surreal Genius Parts 1-2 (somewhat revised)
By Brendan O'Donnell
Posted by "Brendan O'Donnell" <brenda02@sprynet.com>
Posting date: Sun, 10 Nov 1996 23:06:51 -0800 part 1
Posting date: Sun, 10 Nov 1996 23:07:24 -0800 part 2
Quick Quote: "sorryicalledyouapervert"
Comments: 'Surreal' is right. A genius Ranma who thinks before he
talks (mostly) is strange. His relationship with Akane is what I'm
looking forward to.
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Ranma: Ranko 1/2 Parts 30-31
By Sebastian Weinberg
Posted by bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian
Weinberg)
Posting date: Mon, 11 Nov 1996 19:27:27 +0200 Part 30
Posting date: Mon, 11 Nov 1996 19:41:42 +0200 Part 31
Quick Quote: Akane is my best friend - Try to lay a lip on her and
you die!
Comments: Ranko playing matchmaker? What about an interest for Ranko?
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Ranma: Red Shoe Kasumi [LEMON]
By Terry "superdude" Quick
Posted by JamesAllen <jallen9@allinux1.alliance.net>
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 03:15:27 -0500
Quick Quote: "Eech," muttered Ranma. "Attack of the morning people."
Quick Quote #2: Click Click Click Click
Comments: Heh, poor Dr. Tofu. whikish
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Ranma/SM: Ranmavs.SailorMoon parts I-V
By Shiaw Chi Hokodan
Posted by Shiaw Kang Chi <schi@ea.oac.uci.edu>
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 15:55:53 -0800 (PST) Part I
Posting date: Thu, 14 Nov 1996 23:40:51 -0800 (PST) Part I (Finally
Correct)
Posting date: Thu, 14 Nov 1996 23:58:38 -0800 (PST) Part II
Posting date: Fri, 15 Nov 1996 00:10:59 -0800 (PST) Part III
Posting date: Fri, 15 Nov 1996 01:05:30 -0800 (PST) Part IV
Posting date: Mon, 18 Nov 1996 17:38:26 -0800 (PST) Part V
Quick Quote: "Engaged... to you! Oh my god, you are some sort of
sick pervert! I'm not into that kind of... San Francisco stuff!"
Comments: I was having fun, until you killed off Akane. *sniff*
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Ranma: Ill Met By Starlight, Chapter 1
By Mike Loader and Susan Doenime
Posted by Susan Doenime <wendigo@humbug.org.au>
Posting date: Tue, 12 Nov 1996 18:58:35 +1000 (EST)
Quick Quote: There's something dead or broken in there, and it scares
the hell out of me.
Comments: @.@ A Ranma without honor. Hmmm. The possibilities....
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Well, I'm sending this off before it gets too large to read. 10k,
interesting.
After a quick read over, it seems that I actually read some BGC and
SM. Will miracles never cease. ^_^
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