It's good like the others, but the dreamsequence's (IMHO) doesn't
fit with the first two poems.
If you compare the first two, the second brings the story forward a bit,
maybe the third should do the same? Maybe a dialog between the two of
them.

Anyway, it's good and have a happy ending, just what I like, especially
if Ranma and Akane get together and Ryuoga doesn't.

Hope to see more work from you.

Bye.
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David Thune

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