It's good like the others, but the dreamsequence's (IMHO) doesn't
fit with the first two poems.

        Remember, he was KO-ed 3 times.  What else could I fill it in with?
Besides, I was getting a little tired of the happy-happy stuff and wanted to
go straight into the serious stuff.

If you compare the first two, the second brings the story forward a bit,
maybe the third should do the same? Maybe a dialog between the two of
them.

        How?  Ranma was Ko-ed....

Anyway, it's good and have a happy ending, just what I like, especially
if Ranma and Akane get together and Ryuoga doesn't.

        Thanks!

Hope to see more work from you.

        Oh, you'll see.