The style I've been attempting is:
Action, unquoted third person past tense.
Dialogue, quoted second person present tense.
Thought, unquoted first person present tense.
Hmm... I'll tell you how I do it. Action and Dialogue seem ok,
but for Thought, I either use what you've described (unquoted
first person present tense, or I use forward slashes ' / '. By
treating the slashes as quotes, it appears to work well. I chose
the slash because it gives just a feel of italics, sorta like a
symbol. And as long as you treat them as you do with quotes
in Dialogue, you shouldn't have any problems.
There... my two cents. Whaddya think of that?
Terence Fergusson
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"Another confused census taker?" - Max.
"Actually, it was the Commissioner with another idiotic
and baffling assignment." - Sam.
"Does it involve wanton destruction?" - Max.
"We can only hope." - Sam.
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