Heh..Teenage Angst in Sailor Moon, haven't seen this since Symphony of
Planets I think, and it didn't involve a Senshi. Since I really don't know
much about DBZ, I'll stick with the SM part which dominated this part of
the story (although I do have a vague Idea of where the Dragonball's may
come in..). I like the way you've balanced Minako's role in the Anime and
manga, were in the Manga Minako comes off as being one of the main
characters in the anime she takes the role of another Senshi (and heads
into the background with the other inner Senshi as we head into S and
beyond). And I do like the fact you deal with Minako's behavior in SM in
general. After all she does act like an Air head when she's not in Senshi
form, but act's perhaps the most comptent out of the five in Senshi form
(Hell, she's become more Usagi like in what I know about stars..). You
seem to explain this by going into the Sailor V past, which shows some
nice depth into the character. I also love the fact that people other than
Usagi are talking about finding true loves. Once again after the first
season the only relationship that seemed to matter was Usagi and Mamoru's.
You seem to be seeting up some tension between the other inner senshi
because of this relationship, and I like to see how it play's out. I also
think that you've picked the perfect character to conveay this, Minako,
who is more likely than Mako-chan and Ami to talk openly and seriously
(not Mako-chan's infamous sempai..:) about love. And Rei, well Rei is
Rei...

Anyway, it's an intresting start that looks promising as drama...

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!

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