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Hello everyone, and welcome to the Draxon Review Corner, hosted by your 
friendly, neiborhood Draxon.  Tonight we are reviewing 'Part Three of 
Sidestory for Twisted Path'

One quick note before we begin:  I think this fic serie' deserves it's own 
name, just tell everyone it is a sidestory in the openeing notes, and everyone 
is satisfied ;)

STORY 9(Above Average)  This is cool.  Everything is developing well.  My 
guess as to which part Twister wrote would be the Grim Reaper part.  Give me a 
prize if I'm right ;)  I am eager to see how this story is wrapped up.

Humor 9(Average) Hehe.  This wasn't really meant to be a funny fic, but in a 
few parts it were (Grim Reaper, KS 'battle')And they were done well. You are 
awarded with a 9.

Drama 9(Above Average)  Gee, did Quincy make Ed... angry?  A lot of tension 
has been built up, and it should be interesting how the characters 
deal/get-rid-of it.

Originality 8(Average) This isn't really something new, but I like the way it 
is handled, and I see no direct correlation between this and any other fic 
(Besides Twisted Path)

Realism  Okay, the main character could toast Superman, so I think this isn't 
meant to be realistic.  No rating.

Characterizations 9(Excellent)  I saw everyone acting (for the most part) as 
they did in Twisted Path.  Thou art awarded a 9.

Grammar 10(LEGENDARY) Okay, I just flipped through this fic again and I failed 
to find anything wrong with it (besides scenes not yet written)  I hereby 
award what I believe is my first LEGENDARY GRAMMAR AWARD.  

Descriptions 9(Excellent) Excellent. (Anyone hear an echo?)  cleverly written. 
I would like to say more but i save most of my talking for complaints and 
fixes ;)

Overall 9 (Excellent)  At once funny and serious, this fic is entertainment 
for the whole family.  The mixing of superhero types in the BGC world was done 
well (wait a minute, superheros aren't that different from mages...) and the 
whole package went together smoothly.