Subject: [The More Things Change] Readme, please
From: RPM - acct 3/5
Date: 11/24/1996, 12:23 PM
To: fanfic list


After some fairly _detailed_ C&C by a few members'o the FFML, to whom I
thank VERY much, I feel that TMTC rewrite96 *MIGHT* be finally ready for
RAAC.  BUT, since the FFML has been VERY helpful in writing my other
stuff, I figured I'd put it to the list again just to make sure that
everything is ironed out and all is well.

WHAT'S CHANGED?

-the Mousse subplot is back, and modified
-madame Manami's introduction to the story has been modified
-Ryoko's got more scenes
-modified the epilogue (put down the gun,  WW. n.n;;;)
-continuity fixes here & there to fit better with the manga continuity

And, to save the ffml from 16 seperate tiny posts and to make sure
individual parts don't get lost, I've clumped them all into three
posts....

FILE 1:(168K) prelude - part 5  (modified slightly)
FILE 2:(144K) part 6 - part 11  (modified a bit more)
FILE 3:(160K) part 12 - epilogue (alot of adjustments made)
TOTAL: (472K)

anyways, if this version is clean, then I'll send it off to RAAC.
Thanks for your help, guys. =)

-RpM
p.s. No, I won't release TPOH parts 1-5, not until I've cleaned it up
enough.  It _just_ _isn't_ _ready_.  It's too ugly, an embarrasment, needs
serious repair, I mean it. n.n;;;