Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic](R1/2)Escape 3
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 11/23/1996, 1:15 PM
To: Fanfiction ML

 On Thu, 21 Nov 1996 07:49:02 -0600 (CST) Matthew Trotter wrote:

: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
: Escape From Nerimia
: --------------------------
: Part three: Paranoia
: --------------------------
:  Just because I'm paranoid
:  doesn't mean their not out 
:  to get me.
: --------------------------

"they're"


:    Ranma twisted her arm back in socket, "Thanks Akane.  Your a life saver."

"You're"



: It would be great...then again it 
: could just be the author of the fanfic messing with peoples minds again.

"people's"


:    "What are you blushing about?  Its not like I said your cute or nothin'"

"It's", "you're"


:    "Your reading my mind."

"You're"


:    "Hmmmm, your right Saotome, that is suspicious.

"you're"


:    "Saotome!  Your a genius!"

"You're"


: [1] Probably in shock.  Who would have thought Ranma would propose to 
:     Akane in a fanfic.  Why it was a one in a million thing...then again 
:     there were a lot of fanfics[2].
: [2] Most of them were done by Richard Lawson last weekend.

Too damn right!  Heh!  I hack and slay my way through a C&C of one
of his fics and when I'm done, he has at least *another* 100 K
waiting to be read.  

I wouldn't have it any other way, though.  :)


:    Mr. Saotome snapped his fingers, "Ha!  We can leave master Happossi at 
: the dojo!"

"Happosai" (by the romanization scheme you are using)


:    Daddy slapped Mr. Saotome on the back, "Saotome, your a genius."

"you're"


: About the straving millions in out there in the streets.

I guess you mean "starving".


:    "About wining the trip?"

"winning"


: What would happen if Kasumi started going out with Tofu?  Well, he'd 
: probably loose a lot of business...

I think that's "lose".  Feel free to mallet me.


:    "Why thank you Kasumi.  I was actually just stopping by to see if you 
: had seen Ranma or Genma recently.  I was hopping to see them, just once.  

I guess she *would* be hopping if she saw them, but I think you
mean "hoping" here.


:    Morphine looked up at the roof, "Your doing this on purpose aren't you!"

"You're"


: Why did he know everything.  Why did it matter weather the 
: mortals thought he was in control or not?

"whether"


:    She stood up.  Now mother was going to be going with them.  It felt 
: good, but it wasn't going to be easy.  She was going to have to be 
: careful.  Akane leaned over to her.
:    "Ranko,"
:    "What?"
:    "Yes."
:    "Yes?  Hey whadda ya mean yes?  Should I. . . .know....yes?...yes...but
: that. . . .they..she....Akane?..."
: 
:    "Oh dear, Ranko's fainted!"
:    "The poor girl, the excitement must have been too much for her."

Awww.  This was *so* cute.

I'm starting to enjoy this more and more.  I laughed out loud a
lot during this part.


Sebastian
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