On Tue, 19 Nov 1996 20:30:12 -0500, Magic Knight Kyone
<jdlowry@eos.ncsu.edu> wrote:

So, what did you think?  Like it?  Hate it?  Please tell me, or I won’t
get better.

This story was written in about an hour.  I hope there aren’t too many
problems in it.

Talk to you guy’s latter!

Great funny little parody story. Your technique does need a little
work. For example, your narration should stick to past tense
throughout the story. Apart from that, I thought it was great!

Gary

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe