Very, very powerful. Hit fairly hard, it did.

Interesting structure in the beginning...seemed more akin to blank verse
than prose. Whatever it was, it was very effective.

   The last part, his talk will Nabiki, didn't really seem as strong as
the rest...but that's more because of the quality of the first part than a
defect in the second, I think.

   This is the point where I normally say I'll be looking forward to
seeing more of this, but...I think it ended in the appropriate place. So
I'll just hope to see more works by the author. Mebbe something happy next
time; had to reread on of the Matt Trotter fics to get over that one. ;)

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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