On Wed, 20 Nov 1996 21:07:33 -0500 (EST), Ranchan
<ranchan@mail.accent.net> wrote:

This fic comes to you from my partner Paul "Happy Hentai" Ervi.  Enjoy and
send me your comments.

After reading the first two parts so far...

One word: Paragraphs.

When doing dialog in story form, you should start a new paragraph
every time the speaker changes. That'll make your work much, much
easier to follow.

Gary


Gary Kleppe
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