Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][ranma][beta] Bonded chapter 2]
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 11/16/1996, 4:04 PM
To: Fanfiction ML

 On Sun, 03 Nov 1996 18:56:23 -0600 Doug Torneden wrote:

: Bonded
: 
: A Ranma 1/2 Fanfic
: by Doug "daneel" Torneden
: We all know who created the series but thanks and credit still
: goes to the goddess Takahashi for creating it.
: 
: Chapter 2

Ah, yes, that's better.  :)

The last chapter had too much generic filler for my tastes, but
this one was entirely yours.  I especially like the way that
Ryouga always misses the cautions that the monk mentions.  :) 
Very much in character, I would say.

Please do continue soon.


Sebastian
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