There are too many good scores, maybe I'm getting too generous.


THY INWARD LOVE PARTS 3-6
by Richard Lawson
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 8
*Characters: 7
*Drama: 5
*Overall: 9 Not bad, when I first went to read this series, I began reading
with some disgust. It's because of all the things I heard about this story,
and so I was like, "Ug, not THIS type of fic again!" Oh well, My favorite
was Part 4, I think that story alone gave this review a 9, even though rest
of them were very well written. 

DARK FIRE! CHAPTERS 12-20
by Daniel Harrison
*Grammar: 5
*Story: 8
*Characters: 8
*Drama: 3
*Overall: 8.9 Finally finished this fic. Pretty good, it needs some heavy
polishing, but still good. Lots of immature writing, but I still liked it.
Not bad for a Sailor Moon anything. (I don't like Sailor Moon that much) I
think Daniel's strong points are that he makes the characters (even Sailor
Moon characterws ^_^) likeable. Only problem in this fic is that he seemed
to have rushed in the middle, I think he should have paced himself more
near parts 10-15.

WISHING UPON THE SAME STAR PARTS 1-3
by Megane 6.7
*Grammar: 8 nice writing style
*Story: 7 an ordinary story
*Characters: 7 Not much development in the first three chapters, that's
normal. The characters are IC majority of the time, that is good
*Overall: 8 Nice fanfic, good job. No major problems that I could pick out.

PROJECT S-BOY PTS 2-3
by David K. Outram
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 8
*Characters: 8.6 I love how you handle your characters. It makes me want to
go buy a Superboy comic.
*Humor: 4
*Overall: 8.5 Like I said before, the writing needs alittle work, but the
story is FUN. I love it, a very nice break from these depressing Ranma fics
that came out. I can't wait to read more.

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Next:
More Project S-Boy, TIL,
UY: "JUST A DREAM?," and a Lesson in Love.
I will try to fit more storys that were posted to the ffml. If I feel like
it.