Ok, I asked nicely the first time.  (In the preamble before Chapter 6)
Now I'm gonna get explicit.  Is chapter 6 really in place?
I really need comments because I will not be able to write Chapter 7,8,
9 et al, without knowing whether Chapter 6 fits in.  So far I have received
a total on 2 responses, both of which claim that I should slow down what is
happening.  

So to the people who have read my recent post:  please give me input.  I
won't be able to write unless I know whether Chapter 6 fits in the scheme of
things.

Michael Chen
who unlike Hitomi Ichinohei, is not fishing for complements :)
(How can a person whose prose seems like music complain that he needs
comments other than "Good Job"?  I have no %$#@ing clue!  Go ask Hitomi!)