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Story 9.3 This is great!  Two of my favorite fic series' (please tell me the 
plural of series in any reply to this;) are getting the mesh down, and with 
the work of two of our best authors, is coming out great!  This was FUNNY!!!  
"AAAAAAAAH!!!"  Bert screamed in Japanese ;)  I do have some questions 
involving this.  In alternate Zone, a lot of the stuff we see here is 
mentioned, as if Bert had done the things that are occuring in this fic;  will 
these similarities be kept outside of mainstream BGZone?  I'm not sure I can 
keep up with it all... ;)

Sidenote:  The main characters of Ranma 1/2 have seemingly been thrown aside 
for this; with only minor contact.  I would recommend MORE of the characters 
being involved in the action; Chaotic, neurotic...

Characterizations 9.4 Seeing as the main characters had alter-ego's writing 
for them, it is hard to lower anything here.  I was a tad surprised when Bert 
gave out his name, especially when he is supposed to be paranoid of any and 
everything in the world; I believe  that it was a tad sloppy to give out ones 
name while in a hardsuit. 

Grammer 9.4 I REFUSE to look thru that HUGE thing for errors.  With the 
knowledge that I noticed few errors while reading, and the knowledge that this 
was written by good authors, I can hazard a 9 without losing my 
as-not-yet-developed-reputation-as-a-good-reviewer *WHEW!*

Descriptions 9.4 Good!  I never had trouble visualizing anything that was in 
this fic.  One problem that i did have (that isnt with your writing) was that 
I visualized Twister and Bert as being drawn with BGC 6 style and quality, and 
the rest of the characters came from the 'Anything Goes' intro for Ranma 1/2. 
Odd, huh?  This is what caffeine can do to your soul...

Fun-Factor 9.6  This was funny ;)  I LOVE funny ;) Keep it up, the change from 
funny to serious and back to funny throughout the fic was excellent.  I 
enjoyed it immensly.

  Overall 9.5  I dont think this is the average but this is the general 
impression i was left with after reading.  Well,  Now that I have managed to 
find a few useful comments (1 or 2) I can go to bed in peace...

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