| Subject: About Revised Building Bridges |
| From: WebDragon |
| Date: 11/13/1996, 2:01 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Due to some of the C&C I have read on this story, I have changed
some aspects of the fic in parts 2 and 3, which will be posted after this
message.
1) The scene between Akane and Ranma (part 2)
Due to C&C from David Bateson
2) The love scene between Ranma and Kentaro, near the end (part 3)
Due to C&C from MD Price and David Bateson
Please read and tell me if they are better this time around.