On Sat, 9 Nov 1996, Suds-kun wrote:
: RPM - acct 3/5 wrote:
: > I personally hated the way I handled how Akane found out about
: > her being passion-spiced... and decided that it really wasn't
: > necessary for her to ever find out. Now, I ask you folks,
: > you too Suds-kun, SHOULD I have Akane find out? And if so,
: > how should it happen?
Personally I think that Akane should *not* know. Simply because I
wish their relationship to last. :) If she *was* told, I'd like
her to laugh and say "I suspected as much, but didn't care either
way - after all, I loved him even before." So there. :P
: Either add the bit where Mousse spills the beans and leave R&A's
: relationship as recounted or drop it and change R&A's relationship
: accordingly.
:
: Without the bit, R&A's fight in the epilogue seemed a little
: dis-heartening to me. Because of this, I feel that Mousse's actions
: should be told for the reader's benefit, at the very least.
I agree about their behavior in the epilogue. It should either be
toned down a little, or better explained. As for the readers
benefit: even if someone didn't get what happened right in part 1
(I suspected it as soon as I read it), Mousse's *almost*-slip
sometime later "It sure worked on... err." should really be enough.
Sebastian