[looks it over]
Hmmm...looks ok, I guess nice intro [gets to the lemon bit]
[piku]
[piku]
What the HELL do you think you're doing?!?
(or)
Oh my.  That seems *dreadfully* out of character, now, doesn't it.
I can see yoru inspirations as "have Kasumi do something for herself"
But there's a difference between doing something for yourself and
menacing the local medical populace with a bullwhip, now isn't there?
I *do* wish that you wouldn't mistreat Kasumi-sensei so.

Terry "The Human Mellotron" Marks
Second Student in the Tendo Kasumi School of Philosophy
-Seeking enlightenment through normalcy.
normal@grove.ufl.edu