Well, as one of the few who DON'T hate you, I'd just like to say you're
too damned hard on yourself. Get off the cross, somebody else needs the
wood ;p
I wish I could write like this, I really do. I personally don't think I
would go the route Ranma took, actually, I'm pretty sure I COULDN'T, but
you manage to write this in a way that allows me to suspend my
disbelief.
Ranma broke off the kiss after a moment and stared into his eyes. "Hmmm..."
Her voice was low, husky. "I like this. I think I definitely like this.
I can do this for the rest of my life, as long as it's you I'm doing it
to. There's no damn koi on my breast, either. It must really be love."
The last scene comes on a little strong (I have difficulty believing
Ranma would suddenly go all seductive like that). Still, I love the bit
where Kentaro dumps what he thinks is Nyannichuan on himself.
As for this being a self-insertion fic, if it is I really don't care.
Kentaro doesn't exhibit any of the Otaku-insertion qualities. He's
human, fallable, sometimes selfish, but still admirable because of it.
This is a controversial fic, that's true, but that's a GOOD thing. Don't
let anyone else tell you otherwise! The people who are telling you to
curl up and die are the same ones who are reading and writing those
lesbian lemon scenes with the Ranma 1/2 female characters.
Oh, you may now consider me a staunch fan of your stuff.
The Prime Saggitarian,
Alpha Centauri
Hear, Hear! If that isnt' clear enough, I also liked your fic a lot. And
in the words of Alpha Centauri, don't stop!
Eric.
P.S. You've earned another fan :)