The only prob I had with this fic was that the ending was to fast and 
too neat.  Hell I was tearing up when I thought Kentaro was OOL.  
Rework the ending, drag it out a little more and it will be up there with 
every other fic Richard has written. (I'm just a little bit of a fan)

BTW  I'm from America and I knew what a Poofhta was.  I watched 
way to much Monty Python.

bye Lisa
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