MAISON IKKOKU:  THEIR LAST NIGHT
by Jeffrey "OneShot" Wong
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 7
*Characters: 7  Seemed out of character<
*Drama: 8  I loved the ending.<br>
*Overall: 7  Not a fantastic story, but a good, short one.  I only read two
of Jeff's stories and they both had unhappy endings.  I don't like happy
endings either, and I loved the way he told the ending, short and sweet. 
However, the story wasn't much for developing the characters.

TRUE LOVE
by Jeanne Hedge
*Grammar: 8  Very detailed and very well written.  A few punctuation errors
that's not a big prob.
*Story: 9  
*Characters: 8 They were developed nicely, but sometimes a little OOC.
*Drama: 6
*Overall: 8.5  A very good BGC fanfic.  My first good BGC fanfic I read.
This story did a nice job of crating suspense and emotions.  The writing
style is excellent, almost professional like.  Good job, Ms.  Hedge. But .
 . the story seemed a little dry.

DARK FIRE! CHAPTERS 1-11
by Daniel Harrison
*Grammar: 5 I think Daniel just posted what he typed, I saw lots of grammar
errors.
*Story: 8  Great plot, unoriginal, but the it is told very well.
*Characters: 7
*Overall: 8.5 Sailor Moon, I saw about five eposides and never got myself
to like that show. Of course, if I don't like the orginal work, I usually
won't like the fanfic.  But this Sailor Moon fanfic is getting pretty
interesting. After some minutes into this, this gets pretty addictive! Some
grips are that in some parts, the narritive is told immaturely; but the
good building of suspense makes up for it. Also, some other problem is that
the story, even though it is told well, seems to be rushed. In any case, it
is still a great fanfic; I can't wait till I read the rest of it. Another
great story from the author of "Summer Cruise," Daniel Harrison. BTW, if
you are a KOR fan, I suggest you read "Summer Cruise,"  one of the best.

CRYS CHAPTERS 4-END
by Chris Schumacher
*Grammar: 8  
*Story: 7 Chapter four wasn't great, but chapter 5 was excellent.
*Characters: 7
*Drama: 4 When Crys dies.  Oops . . . I forgot to put a spoiler warning, oh
well. 
*Overall: 7.5 An Okay job, not the best that Chris has done though. I don't
know what the problem is, it just didn't "grab" me as much.

DIZZY JAPAN PART 1-2
by Terry Marks
*Grammar: 6
*Story: 7 It got interesting near the end of chapter 2
*Characters: 7 I was suspecting this was an orginal flavor type fanfic. And
they were a bit, a bit OOC, esp Ranma.
*Humor: 2
*Overall: 6.5 The plot jumps from tornadoes to Ryouga and Kodachi . . . I
don't know what's the real plot is now anymore.

KIMAGURE ORANGE COLLEGE PT 5-7
by Andy Combs and Stephen Tsai
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 8.5 Each one of the episodes are wounderfully done.
*Characters: 8.9 Could have been a 9 if I could figure out who is who
*Humor: 5
*Overall: 9 No question, one of the best KOR or in fact any anime fanfic
series.  Not deep as some of other famous fanfics, but its whimsicalness
makes it good as it is.


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Next fanfics to be reviewed:
Project S-boy chapters 2-? by David Outram
Wishing Upon series by Fcasper (Megane 6.7)
Thy Inward Love by Lawson
Rest of Dark Fire by Daniel Harrison
and other fanfics I'm not so sure about (I'm going to try to review some
fanfics that was actually posted to the ffml this month; I promise!)

BTW. You can start sending in your votes for the best fanfics reviewed by
Pic in 96. (bad title, I know)
Any fanfic I reviewed is nominated, just go visit my site
(www.altered.com/yinyang/fanfic.html) for the stories that you can choose
from.  (I would wait till Dec. before you vote though, cuz I am going to
review more)  But if you want to vote now, vote for three in no particular
order.