RPM - acct 3/5 wrote:
Comments #2: I remember the first posting of TMTC, and I see you
dropped
Mousse's statement to Akane. It pretty much explained Ranma &
Akane's relationship in the story. Why drop it?
I personally hated the way I handled how Akane found out about
her being passion-spiced... and decided that it really wasn't
necessary for her to ever find out. Now, I ask you folks,
you too Suds-kun, SHOULD I have Akane find out? And if so,
how should it happen?
-rpm
Without the comment, Akane's questions to Ranma, when they were
returning with bags of store bought items, seemed abrupt and from left
field. If she knows, this changes their relationship, and you showed the
change. If she doesn't know, then their releationship doesn't change
(well, not as quickly).
Either add the bit where Mousse spills the beans and leave R&A's
relationship as recounted or drop it and change R&A's relationship
accordingly.
Without the bit, R&A's fight in the epilogue seemed a little
dis-heartening to me. Because of this, I feel that Mousse's actions
should be told for the reader's benefit, at the very least.