Subject: Re: Worse, Chapter Six
From: WebDragon
Date: 11/8/1996, 2:19 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Scott:  Actually, people seem to like "Twilight Existence."  But yes, 
Worse is due again.  Now, where were we? 
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Heh, is this a pun?  :)

	"Well, just make sure it's back at the dojo tomorrow, dear.  This 
apartment building doesn't allow pets, and after what the Tenants' 
Committee did to the nice young lady with the penguin..."

        Rumic Theater rocks!

	Getting a little too heated there.  Even after all this time, 
Ranma was still uncomfortable with the female sexual response.  She 
forced herself to concentrate on a complex kata, and then to sleep. 

        That is the reason why I like this part 6...you explore Ranma's
female side...

	"Most of the memories I have of Ryouga are of his curse (that's 
how I really knew him, the bandana was just the clincher) and his 
fighting skills.  He loved...someone else."
	"That's so sad.  You two are the most romantic couple I know, 
like the Star Festival lovers who can meet but once a year."

        Another reason why I like this part, Ranma-chan and Ryoga
2gether4ever.  Heh heh heh heh.

	Elements of this chapter were rewritten in response to the 
discussion of "Thy Outward Part."

        I can see that...

        It seems as if Ranma-chan had been running around with the guys in
this world....heh.  Sure will be interesting to read more on this...