Hello All!
This is a departure from my normal reviews. Why? This story made me
think. It made me have strong emotions. It's a story that deserves more
than just "Comments:"
Thoughts & Reactions: At first, I thought the story was about Akane.
Looking back, the clues were quite obvious as to who was 'sensei.' I
read & read and didn't even think to look for a quote. I was so wrapped
up in the story that I was concerned for each of the characters (except
Komatsu). When I finished I was upset, I paced, I grumbled, I even got
slightly depressed. "How could (sensei) do that!" I shouted at my
'puter. Then I realised that I cared about the characters in the story,
based on the story itself. Kentaro, sensei and even the woman in the
yellow dress. I did not enjoy reading this story. But, when I started, I
couldn't stop reading. Even after reading the revised version posted to
RAAC, I still don't like the the ending.
O.k., enough ranting. What kind of review do I give?
Ranma: Thy Outward Part
Richard Lawson <sterman@sprynet.com>
Quick Quote:
Comments: A very well written, enthralling story. Be warned, it brings
out emotions that you may be trying to keep under wraps.
Five Tea Kettles