On Thu, 7 Nov 1996, Doug Murphy wrote:

Story: 9.0 What can I say, it is the exact same as the Anime!

It's supposed to be from the Manga...

Grammar: 9.0  Perfect.

First time I ever heard of my grammer being perfect.

Descriptions: 9.0 Perfect.  I got it complete with sound effects ;)

I really didn't describe that much.

Overall: 8.0  The technical lawlessness saves this from being in the gutter, 
but its exactness to the series kept this below a 9.  Soon I will move on to 
part two, which should score significantly higher... One question:  Why did 
you write part one anyway?  It would have probably been quicker to say "Okay 
we will start off when..."

Well, a lot of people wanted to know a few things, and I started to write 
some stuff.  Then people wanted to know some more, etc.

Besides, starting right from the begining makes everything a lot more 
fun.  (Not to mention giving me an exercise in translating.)

Hitomi

Ichinohei Hitomi
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