The tall youth scratched the back of his head, not quite knowing
how to begin.  He decided just to go for it.  "I'm Saotome Ranma.  Excuse
me." 

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Story: 9.0 What can I say, it is the exact same as the Anime!

Characters: 9.0  Somehow I doubt anyone was out of character...

Grammar: 9.0  Perfect.

Descriptions: 9.0 Perfect.  I got it complete with sound effects ;)

Fun Factor: 6.0  Too much the same for me, I have a tape of this in my 
bedroom!

Originality 6.0 This is not origional... YET.  Something tell me this wont 
follow the Ranma storyline exactly for too long...

Overall: 8.0  The technical lawlessness saves this from being in the gutter, 
but its exactness to the series kept this below a 9.  Soon I will move on to 
part two, which should score significantly higher... One question:  Why did 
you write part one anyway?  It would have probably been quicker to say "Okay 
we will start off when..."

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