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Welcome all from the Draxon Review Corner.  It seems I had a bit more time on 
my hands than expected, so I will immediately review Nullifier part 4.

Story: 8.  I Lack the first 3 parts (Please send), however I have deciphered a 
good deal of the storyline from information in Part 4. I like the way things 
are going.

Characterization 8.5  The way the Nullifier's effects are handled is great.  
Ranma-chan has some disappointment, but not too much, at not being attracted 
to girls anymore.  We see Akane treating Ranma-chan better than before the 
split, which is realistic.  I'll have to check the earlier parts to see what 
the story is with Shampoo and Akane...

Grammar 8.7 Script format is well laid out. No mentionable errors save for the 
frequent =20's at the ends of the lines.

Descriptions 9.0 Using script format allowed for some very vivid descriptions 
without becoming redundant.  Well done.


I'm still waiting on parts 1-2 for BGC Apotheosis to begin reading that 
series.  Rest assured I will continue to provide reviews for all subscribers 
to the FFML.

Draxon-X, Signing off.