Finally! Some time to do C&C on this one!

	The story itself is pretty good, if only a bit confusing in terms of
when Ranko blacks out and awakes again (a little empty line or * * *
wouldn't do much harm...) 
	It's very good to see the story develop this way. It really gets you
thinking about what would happen if Ranma thought things out --and in
this case, it had to be Ranko who did the thinking for him.
	I loved that discussion between Genma and Ranko, but it makes me wonder
what will happen when Mrs. Saotome comes to visit... And not only her,
but Ryouga, Happousai, and all the other characters that would have
shown up regardless of Ranma's curse (like Ukyou, Tarou, the Phoenix
people... so on.)
	BTW, the First Person Perspective Narrative (FPPN, since I'll use this
term a lot,) could be no better. It really fits the character of the
story without running into OOC or such (but in this story, would there
really be an OOC situation?)
	Anyway, keep it up. You've got me riveted.

-- 
The TerBril
(who is finally replying to all the mail he had received.)