Well, here I am again.  Up before work, a little free time, and i am
reviewing a couple more stories.  Boy, I need a social life.  :)

	And that is the topic of our first story, "The Outward Part."  An
interesting tale that takes a spinoff at one of the major points in the
Ranmaverse.  Ranma has to come to terms with a 'problem', and manages to
do this with assistance from a new character.  According to the missive
that sent this story to me, this one caused a furor on the ML.  I could
see where that would happen, however, this story is good in it's own
right.

Story:   2.5
Plot:    3
Humor:   1.5 (Not much humor)
Overall: 3.25

	Alas, that is all the time I have right now.   yes, one story.  I
know.  I may do another review in the AM, but I am not sure.  Remember,
if you have something to ask me, or a story to send me, send it to me
via private Email.  I am not on the ML.  This is because I have enough
mail to process, and not enough time to read Fanfics, let alone review
them.  :)  Have a good day!

Slashtooth@EVNet.com
Reviewer at Large