Subject: Slashtooth's Semi Daily Reviews
From: Slashtooth
Date: 10/30/1996, 8:37 PM
To: Fanfic@fanfic.com

Hello again all!  The response to my offer of reviews has been
overwhelming!  So, a little sooner than expected, comes Slashtooth's
Semi Daily Reviews!

Rating System  1-5 (1=bad   5=Good  Of course :)

	First on the list, a little story entitled "From Dawn Till Dusk."  An
interesting short story about P-Chan and Kasumi.  No, it's not a lemon
or a sickfic, it is a peaceful insight into Kasumi and P-Chan.  A
delightful little reader that shows you maybe, just maybe, Kasumi isn't
as empty as she appears.

Story: I give it a 4
Plot: 3 (Not much plot, just a lot of insight
Overall Review: 3.5

	Next we have "Wishing Upon the Same Star," a five part (so far) story
about a Ryoga that no longer gets lost, Nabiki and Ukyou going to war,
Shampoo going slightly off the deep end, Kodachi being forced into
several rather horrid situations, and a Ranma that seems to be losing
all grips on reality.  And that is only the first five parts.  The
author really put a lot into this one.  I must say, however, that I was
not that fond of this fic.  All the interesting bits of Ranma 1/2 are
slowly being removed, turning it into a shallow comparison.  Ryoga cured
and no longer lost, Shampoo chasing Ranma in BOTH forms now, and several
other things just seem to drain some of the life out of it.

Story: 	 3.5 (The author did put a lot of thought into it)
Plot:    2   (i am still trying to figure out the plot)
Overall: 3

Well, I am getting tired, and I have work tomorrow, so i am going to
call it with those two stories.  Tomorrow we should review "The Long and
Winding Road" and "The Outward Part", with one or two more possibly. 
Have a good night!

Slashtooth@EVNet.com
Reviewer at Large