Alpha C.'s happyface grows arms and begins to clap. Then he begins
replicating himself, each happyface clapping inunison, until there is a
thunder of applause.

Congrats, Zen! We... err, I didn't think it was possible! You managed to
write a story where Ranma goes for Ukyou without killing anyone, using
an 'Elseworld' alternate reality or taking the characters OOC. We salute
you!

But I can tell Zen is fighting against the current of Takahasi's intent,
and Alpha thinks if Zen isn't careful... DAMN, now I'm talking like you!
It's damned insidious! You and Mihoshi!

Anyway, with Akane following Ranma, you'll have to be careful not to let
Takahasi-reality reassert itself, lest you find youself back at square
one.

I like this one! I've always been an Ukyou fan (before I liked Nabiki or
could stand Shampoo, even). Just try not to hurt Akane TOO much. Maybe
put her back together with Shinnosuke or something.

The Prime Saggitarian,
Alpha Centauri

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