On Sat, 26 Oct 1996, Sebastian Weinberg wrote:

Ah.  Finally I had the time to sit down and read all the parts of
this fic.  I had only read part 1 so far and wasn't so sure what
the story was going to be about, since the divergence from the
original only showed in part 2.  Well, now I know, and I'm hooked!

It isn't all that good.

This is *so* cool.  Why, Akane even rivals Nabiki in sneakyness
and misdirection, while Kasumi exhibits her own level of
duplicity, too.  The writing flows nicely, coupled with a far
broader knowledge of Japanese culture (and apparently martial
arts, too) than the usual fic exhibits.  I know I will look
forward to seeing the rest of this chapter and all things the
future will bring.

Well, I just took what I know when I wrote it.  That's all.

Hitomi

Ichinohei Hitomi
Hitomi@terminal.autobahn.mb.ca
http://204.112.189.3/~hitomi
"The beginings of wisdom is the ability to always ask questions."